Standing Up For Yourself [E] A short story about bullying that was made for English class, using homestuck characters. |
A Review from "Simply Positive Review Forum " ! Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port? I saw that someone else had reviewed this and the title intrigued me, so here I am to read! I would also like to warmly welcome you to the site! What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item? Bullying is something that happens to more people than one might think. I don't know if I ever had the courage to do what Jane did in the end. I think it is the right thing to do - to stand up to bullies, but somehow it never seems the right time to do it in reality. What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?th I liked that Jane's friends were all supportive of her. Even though they spoke up to the bully, no one seemed to take charge of the situation until she did it herself. I think we all really have to fight our own battles in our own time. Bullying goes on, even on this website when those with what the perceive as power abuse it. Most bullies are big chickens who are more afraid then their victims are, though. I thought your story made that point very effectively! Nice work! THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps SometHiNg I am not an expert on poetry or prose or short stories. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my thoughts and experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you! Your story is your own and you have done a fine job with it! Well done! END OF SometHiNg Ta Ta until we meet again.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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