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 Warm in the Snow  [E]
building a snowman with friends
by The Fox
Review of Warm in the Snow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Your first line is in bold, but I don't know if it's the title or the first line. If both, you may want to leave it bold but put a double space between it and the actual poem. Then put it in again as the first line.

The poem itself is a delightful mental picture of two friends building the snowman. The last two lines is so sweet. I'd never thought of the fun of putting a snowman together quite like that,
Thanks for sharing.
love, LinnAnn
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