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 A Worthwhile Allegiance - As a Whole   [E]
Science and religion can be healthier than we ever surmised - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Cat Voleur
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello,

I know I did one other review for you today, but then I stumbled across your name again and decided to go ahead and try my hand at reviewing this one as well - the title definitely drew me in.

This one read more like a poem for me, which I really liked. I was also very impressed with your use of language for this piece, I have to admit there were a few words in this one that I've never seen used so well in poetry before.

The tone of this piece was also really good - I felt like it worked well with what you were trying to say.

There was one line in particular that I really liked:

But mostly, these were merely gut-checks
And the ample sharing of sympathies


Something about this line was just very appealing to me, and it made me think. I like poems and lines of poems that make me think.

Thank you so much again for sharing your work.

All the best,

-Cat


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