Hello,

After reading your other poem which I just happened to stumble across, I thought I'd drop by your portfolio to check out some of your other work. I wasn't really expecting to do another review, but I really liked this piece and that's something that I thought you as the writer of it should hear.

Though it didn't have the strong emotional sentiment that the other one did, I think this piece was really inspiring (which I'm fairly certain was your intention.) You did a beautiful job describing hardships while still encouraging the reader to try their best to get what it is they want out of life.

I particularly liked the following line:

This path will certainly not be an easy task,
As any special award in life never comes smoothly.

Thanks again for sharing your work here on the site, and hopefully I'll get the chance to read some more of your stuff in the future.

All the best,


-Cat









My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .