Hello,

This was a really interesting piece, and I have to admit it kept me guessing all the way to the end.

It was a little disorienting to read through initially. I think a little bit more background on the characters would have been nice. Hinting at who this woman was and the events leading up to her being put in the box I think would have helped.

Aside from that I thought it was really good. I didn't know what was going to happen, the writing style was pretty good, and although you didn't get a lot into character development in this piece, there was just enough to give the readers a small taste of their personalities.

Based off of this piece I would be happy to read more from you at any time.

All the best,




-Cat









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