What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp" . Thanks for entering!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

I thought of your pumpkin, just doing his job as required by the holiday mood. It seems like a gray area to cross the line into scary and I felt for the pumpkin's dilemma! We all long to be admired and loved even if we are required to be scary by our jobs.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This part was my favorite:

"Why does this seem such a shock?
Am I not c-carved to scare?
Is it creepy I can talk?
Shriek, moan, groan, b-boo, beware."

The idea of flickering candlelight within adds to the notion of insecurity and hesitancy. You personified your jack-o-lantern very well. Nice work!



THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

SometHiNg

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in The Writer's Cramp. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

Keep entering and keep up the great work!

END OF SometHiNg


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