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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Ghost* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp. Thanks for entering!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is about a lonesome jack-o-lantern longing for his other half. I thought it was poignant and moving as I thought about some lonesome Halloween times I have spent. It is always a lot more fun when shared with someone who is simpatico.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"to keep me company
on these brisk fall nights
when the only lights
I see are those inside of me"

There is something so moving and haunting about that light burning inside for the unknown.

I thought you did a wonderful job with the prompt!

*Thumbsup*

THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

*Pumpkin*SometHiNg*Witchhat*

I am not an expert on poetry or prose. I am merely a reader who loves to read and the judge for today in The Writer's Cramp contest. I am not a proofreader and would rather do most anything else rather than proof read. That is what proofreaders get paid to do. I share my experiences when I read and try not to blabber on too much. I enjoyed visiting with you!

That section I quoted above was among the best poetry I have read here. Brilliant work!

*Leaf*END OF SometHiNg*Leaf*



Ta Ta until we meet again....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such


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