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The Piper  [E]
What defines reality? Carolyn is a brilliant psychiatrist, can she save Benjamin?
by Rune Cutter
Review of The Piper  
Review by April Sunday
In affiliation with AUTHORS DISCUSSION CLUB  
Rated: E | (3.0)
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*WitchHat* OCTOBER 25, 2016

"An eerie tale of dark and light comes into play in the flash fiction: THE PIPER by KenWebb (user:kenwebb} Readers might want to stand back a few paces when they enter this tale, when a concerned "Carolyn Evans" inherits a new case. From climax of THE PIPER can the http://www.writing.com audience take home a fresh kill? Or picture a new monster on the block? During a brief climax for the delusions of Ben Wyr, a patient whom seems less troubled by darkness than one might expect, might entertainment for horror genre surround? Open this one and decide." Rev/10/25/16 *WitchHat*

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Typo @ "abysal"

Welcome to the site, Yellow.

Miss TEFFY (moi) joined also in October but prehistorically in (2004)
The best thing I recall of that time was site emphasis on Autumn Stories and the ever popular Halloween tale.

*Pumpkin* THE SUGGESTION

Fall is great time to explore and find many places to create and enter stories.

Meanwhile, readers might always wonder why a piper?

*Leaf* THE SUGGESTION -- Perhaps, a bit of background for Wyr's madness, if any, is in order.

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