Hello, Acme

What I liked

Of course, I like that it was spamtastic. That goes without saying.

It was also so naughty that you ought to be ashamed of yourself!

But most of all I liked the original form. I've not seen that one before, and it was very interesting and unique.

My favourite line was the pivotal line from the second half:
"Come! Fill my can with Spam!" - it sounds sooooo innocent when taken out of the context of your poem.

What might need work

Nothing. It's terrible enough. Don't give up the day job!!

Keep on spamming!

I'll award this one in the spirit of this spammy contest.

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .