Hello, Kit of House Lannister

What I liked

What an interesting form you've used to write this poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme. But, I especially liked your criticism of "he of the unhandy syllable count" . It was great how you made fun of the fact that it was difficult to fit his name into your poem.

What might need work

I've noticed that everyone in this contest except me and you has introduced copious amounts of spam into their poems. So… I'd suggest that tomorrow you and I both put more spam into our verses.

In the spirit of this contest, I shall award you a single, shiny

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .