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Greetings, Mari McKee


This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC!

First Impressions: "Invalid Item"  is a beautiful poem of faith, of observation, of giving thanks. For many of us, I suspect that in our daily lives, we sometimes (or is it oftentimes) forget to give thanks to our Higher Power; for both the author and this reviewer, this means giving thanks to God above who created all things...

I love the boundaries of this poem - for they are limitless. There is power embedded in Faith Poetry, a form of poetic expression that I believe should be a genre all of its own.

The feeling of being emancipated, the feeling that we have a Divine parent watching over us, for each moment of every day, is intensely inspiring for this reader.

It all comes down to a single word, a single concept, a simply reason for existing and giving thanks.....God.



Overall Impact: My inner heart, be it my psyche and/or my muse, feels the uplifting impact of this work - not unlike that of someone who discovers that they have wings ... and now have unlimited freedom.

That is what happens for me when I read poetry like "Invalid Item" : as I read deeper, I marvel more and more about what it is that the author gives thanks for. There is a certain feeling too that as we continue down this Path, this path of Life, we have so much to be grateful for. Faith like this serves us in times of great loss ... and times of plentifulness as well.

The key is...is to never cease giving thanks. Each and every day.



Errors: No mistakes found in this work this morning!! *Smile*



Summation: When walking along various paths in this world, we oftentimes fail to use the senses...sight, touch, hearing, smell, taste... outright in developing poetry like this. This poem, "Invalid Item"  gives us plenty of these senses as we seemingly "glide" through this awesome writing.

It will prove to be one of many highlights of my day!

Thank you and.... as always... KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!! *Heart*




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"Dr.J"


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