Greetings, SandraLynn Team Florent! ! Thank you for submitting your entry in the "Writing 4 Kids Contest " .

Prompt: Write a scary or slightly scary mystery story or poem for children who are anywhere from a toddler to a pre-teen. It does not have to be about Halloween, though it can be, if you choose. You may also opt to submit a short chapter if you prefer. No more than 500 words for stories/chapters and no more than 20 lines for poetry.


Oh, that's quite imaginative--a spider weaving a dream catcher, and she's called a web witch. Interesting! I like it.

I'm so glad she didn't end up being a bed bug.

I liked how you said this:
and shoos away shadows when she shuts off my night light.

There were just a few punctuation issues, but all and all, it was a delightful story told in rhyme. I keep thinking about what the dream weave will look like when the spider is finished with it.

I especially liked:

Your sleep-spell softly sings to me. Slumber magic's best.

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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