Hello, Andy~hating university

I've come along to see what you've entered into {bitem:"Invalid Item" 

What I liked

I like the structure you've employed. I recognised it as a sonnet immediately, but was unfamiliar with the particular type. It looks interesting, with refrains like a villanelle but the stanza structure of a sonnet.

The flow of the story was good and made very logical use of SPAM.

This gets a well deserved single, shiny in accordance with the contest guidelines "Invalid Item" 

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .