Hello, papadoc1

I've come along to see what you've entered into {bitem:"Invalid Item" 

What I liked

"So welcome to the world of Sum Ting Wong" is a wonderful pun. Excellent stuff.

You did a great job of maintaining the rhyme scheme throughout.

This gets a well deserved single, shiny in accordance with the contest guidelines "Invalid Item" 

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




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