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Very nice inferred events at the end of this poem, and a great story that flowed really well and came to a great resolution.

A fantastic use of SPAM, too. *Wink*

Look forward to seeing your day 6 entry!

This gets a well deserved single, shiny *Star* in accordance with the contest guidelines "Invalid Item *Smile*

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