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This Old House  [ASR]
A deathly scream in the middle of the night
by W.D.Wilcox
Review of This Old House  
Review by April Sunday
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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November 14, 2016

Thanks, Bill for entering your poem, THIS OLD HOUSE into this year's

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In a sense must admit the those peculiar

"pops and cracks" & "moans and groans" seem to plague even the like of moi .. and in more than one old house.

This is well done, presented artistically and a fun read.

Lastly, when the house, itself, ends up with that creepy "smile on its face."

Well, I just couldn't help but say --- Drat, because the domicile won.

Best Autumn onto Winter --

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