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Whispers in the Dark  [E]
This is the only place she can find her love.
by Purple Celebrates
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Purple Celebrates

I love the rhythm and flow of this poem. With its pacy short lines and great use of rhyme I think this would sound fantastic read aloud. The poem has an emotional warmth to it and a romantic feel. Can't find anything that needs improving. Very happy to give this a full five stars. Thanks for sharing your work :D

Best wishes,
Mark


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