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 The People Upstairs  [18+]
Grandma's got a poltergeist, and it may just be the answer to David Sullivan's problem...
by J. Robert Kane
Review by April Sunday
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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NOVEMBER 21, 2016

Hello Mr. Kane --- Thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item" 

I took a few pauses to thoroughly enjoy your traditional length short story, THE PEOPLE UPSTAIRS. Great title!

This is indeed a clincher. You've appropriate setting --- Long Island.
Family tie and characters, Grandmother, David and even Dolon --- whose concluding phone call ends the tale in an endearing type compliment as if a payback to the Sullivan family.

OF: The people upstairs, those invisible mites whom harass the kind old lady, who even cooks for them -- using the hostess card here is quite an addition -- the unplugged TV, reminiscent of Steven King's
STORM OF THE CENTURY -- all combine with fine plotting, step-by-step fortitude making this one a true keeper.

Good Luck in the contest.

Cordially, TEFF
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