Well....I loved how you worked so many names of us into the work. lol You have an incomplete sentence 'The castle for the 'Fantasy and Science fiction.' That was all you put.

Loved the bruise on the face, nice touch. You did well if that was all you got. ha ha ha

It needs to be broken into paragraphs for easier reading. I think there is a different tab to push to maintain your...whatever the word is I need...format!

Oh, and I loved the fairy dust. Wondered how long it would stay on the pod. roflol
love you,
LinnAnn