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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Cherokeescribe

This is a beautifully constructed poem about memory. I love the image of the picture window. I also like how in the poem the memories are a distraction from writing an article. As a writer who is too often prone to distraction and procrastination, I can very much relate to that.

This is also a great example of the Dorsmimbra form. You seem to have met all the requirements. You've chosen a particularly strong opening line which is essential with this form as the first line also closes the poem.

What particularly stood out for me was the internal rhyme in your middle stanza. Very effective.

Congratulations on having this featured in this week's poetry newsletter.

Best wishes,
Mark


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