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Autumnal Spirits  [E]
A Dorsimbra inspired by a Pond Poetry image.
by Dave
Review of Autumnal Spirits  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Dave

This is a wonderful example of the Dorsimbra form. I really like the picture you've included with the poem too.

You seem to have met all the requirements of the form and the poem flows really well. Your effective use of alliteration really helps with this. The title fits the poem well and this was a pleasure to read.

Congratulations on having this featured in this week's newsletter.

Best wishes,
Mark


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