Hello!Neva

I am sending you a review of your poem, "A Thanksgiving Past" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

WHY I AM REVIEWING THIS ITEM:I liked this gratitude poem and the way you telling this.

FIRST IMPRESSION : Beautifully told and written. Through this poem you are remembering your Grandma, mother, Grandpa and what they gave to you. You remember their cooking “Turkey and oyster dressing”, “baked the pumpkin pie” “whipped the cream” “cranberry sauce”.

FAVORITE LINES:I liked the last stanza
"A Thanksgiving past
We gathered in the kitchen
And not in a dining room
Mom's cranberry sauce
Made with the whole cranberry
Memories of Thanksgiving"

OVERALL IMPRESSION This is a wonderful narrative poem; flowed beautifully. I learned how to write an sedoka poem. Thank you for sharing. I liked the way you put out your feelings. I enjoyed your poem.


Happy Writing!

Mina  


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