I have to be honest. I'm a bit confused. The poem doesn't look or sound like a poem at all. There are no verses, nothing to separate them as far as I can tell.

Also there are Indians still, so that also confused me. I'm 1/8 Indian myself.

Even on the reservation outside of town, there is concrete. I did like the part about 'gazed upon that moon.'

Thanks for sharing. Nice imagery and thoughts even if not in any poetic style I'm aware of.