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Review of The Noisy River  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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My review was almost done and then it disappeared. Argh.

I reread part of the poem, I didn't realize at first the last word in the line was also the beginning of the next line. Then you emphasize 'noisy'.

I have found, at least here where I live, the train and the people are much more noisy than the river. lol

I enjoyed your poem, good imagery and the ending'/beginning words were great.
love, LinnAnn
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