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Review of Feeling Frail  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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A rhyming marvel,
the reader sees the travail.
The emotions are real,
no need to dispel.

The flow is smooth,
the pace is not a race.
Grammatically there are no bumps along the way,
and no changes are needed for the message is plainly stated.

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