This is an image of life,
filled with happiness and strife.
The rhyming scheme is excellent,
creating a feeling of descent.
Meaning that as the poem flows,
one can feel the thoughts slow.
The flow is quite the show,
because grammatically nary a jot nor tittle is akimbo.
The pace is slow and rightly so,
as the reader is filled with thoughts flowing like so.

Write on!
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