The concept of freewill is well laid out.
Then there is a warning sign along the way.
Emotionally the reader feels free, and then brought down to earth with the "warning sign".
The form and structure are adequately created.
The flow is smooth.
The rhyming adds to that smooth flow.
The pace is sensational.
The absence of any major grammatical snafu's is indicative of your attention to detail.

Write on!
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