Sincerity v/s lip service.
That's what the reader feels is the message.
The truth of sin is revealed,
and the forgiveness of same is proffered.
The rhyming is like a diamond,
glows and man the direction shows.
The flow is like a pool of water,
just rippling so smoothly as the words cascade downward toward the end.
The pace is an ace,
The grammatical prowess is evident in this piece.

Write on!
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