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Rated: E | (5.0)
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In so few lines,
your writing skill defines,
the war between good and evil.
It hearkens back to life lessons,
and the things learned along the way.
The flow is smooth.
The pace is not a race, and quite detail filled for such a small piece.
The grammatical excellence of this enhances the smooth nature of this piece.

Write on!
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