Hello!Wolfbane

I just read your poem.

Initial Impression: Wonderful poem about our mother nature.

Theme and Creativity: I like the way you describes beautifully a lot of problems that our mother earth faces now. But sadly we don't pay the respect that she deserves. We create the things to make our life easier. But by using them we polluted the air and sea.

Technique: I appreciate the simplicity of your writing. Your rhyming scheme (abab) is beautiful.

Favorite lines:
We ask ourselves, when? No one really knows.
We played our part, now all our soul's to blame.
The ice will move in to crush as it grows.
Live, carry what's left of our human name.

Suggestions: I didn't see any mistakes.
Overall Impression:. Thanks Wolfbane for sharing this important message.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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