Hello!mix n match

I just read this piece.

This is good piece about the meaning of friendship. Beautifully told and written with alphabet and quotes. It packed with message. The way you wrote it kept me reading it from the beginning to the end. I understood that this poem written for a contest on topic 'alphabet' came up with this advice. I think it follow the prompt perfectly.

Yes, having a good friend is like a treasure. They play crucial parts in one’s life. Often they are closer than family members.

Suggestion : I think you need some paragraph break. You can use writing ML to make it more interesting.

I enjoyed it reading. Keep writing.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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