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 Be yourself   [E]
All i can say is that when I entered this in a contest I got tenth place.Hope you like it!
by Ali
Review of Be yourself  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello!Ali

I just read your poem.

This is a good poem packed with message. Concept is unique. This poem is beautiful inside every line. It is our own responsibility to bring our own talent and act accordingly. I love this piece especially the last stanza

But make your enemies friends.
Let your imagination fly
Out with the stars
Until you feel free.
Never let your mind go
Till you reach the stars

I look forward to read more of your write.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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