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What brought Hoovsie meandering in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me recently with a review for my story, so here I am to visit you.

What does hoovsie think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think this is the argument that God (through Michael) and the various Satans will always have. They rail at one another but never listen or really take it to heart what is being said.

Technically speaking, using double spacing would help the reader like me (who has vision issues) to read more comfortably.

What does hooves moo and applaud about while reading your item?

*Thumbsup* I think the message that hatred directed at a group is evil comes through. Of course it is directed both ways at times, but it isn't right when it happens any way. Does Michael take the identity of the atheist gun lover in order to fit in better or to rebel a bit, himself? This had me wondering a little. Of course, no one is perfect.

The language was a bit harsh, but it fit the situation I think. Whatever, it is part of the culture now.

In the end, what was accomplished? This is the big question - what side was advanced - if any? Or is it just to regroup and fight another day?

Nice work!

HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps

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Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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