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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Survivor48

This is a positive, encouraging but realistic poem about coping with life's troubles. I like your honesty about the stress that problems can cause. I think this makes your message that problems can be overcome all the stronger and I'm sure readers will find that combination useful.

I noticed one error in your third couplet. You write, 'predicaments frames suffering'. This should be either predicament frames or predicaments frame.

I think your burning imagery in your opening couplet is strong and makes for a powerful opening to the poem.

I also really liked the internal rhyme of 'misery/catastrophe'.

Keep up the good work :D

Best wishes,
Mark


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