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A Good Heart  [18+]
An Egyptologist falls for a beautiful, younger woman. First place Short Shots, Oct 2016
by Christopher Roy Denton
Review of A Good Heart  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello there Christopher Roy Denton
This is a Simply Positive Review. *Snow5*



I am also reviewing your story as a judge for the
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Short Shots: Official WDC Contest  (ASR)
Use the photo to inspire your creativity. Write a short story and win big prizes!
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Thanks for entering!


*Shock*My goodness, talk about heart stopping moments! I was hooked from start to finish with the curiosity factor woven within the story.

*Fleurdelis* The reader is led to believe the professor is a mere skirt-chasing man in a position of power, and then is further enlightened by the actions of this very narcissistic Egyptology professor.

*Bird* You used the prompt picture in a a very creative way. It brought about a horror story befitting the month of October and blended the scene of the man walking in the stormy weather, umbrella held over his head.

*Frog* This prompt could have taken a writer anywhere with their story's interpretation of it. I am always in awe of the creativity that comes forth with these picture prompts.

*Hammer* I did not see any gaping errors to report. Although a little blip may be hidden from my radar, for a contest of this magnitude, I saw a fine piece of work in your story.

Loved the twist at the end. *Police*

Well done!



Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering! *Delight*

Regards,
Web~Witch

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