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 |  | And Then Again...  [E] Prayers, wishes...everything has two sides...  |
| (4.5)| I am reviewing your story as a judge for the
Thanks for entering!   Wow, I was deeply enthralled with this story. You bring the reader on a magical, or most better described as a miraculous journey. I loved the fact that it had a strong message of hope and charity and love being shared. When people have become so distrusting and cynical, this is just the typo of "Hallmark Moment" that is needed to capture the hearts and minds of the populous. The "Messiah-like" being brought his magic to several people in need, thus performing little miracles that would affect their lives forever after. Beautiful!  Observations: He shrugged and continued walking away from that what[which?] was into another tomorrow. He put his hand in his pocket and fingered off a twenty [that] was outermost on his money clip. Nicely written story, unique use of the photo prompt and one that makes the reader feel the joy long after leaving the page.  Good luck with the contest, and again, thanks for entering!  Regards, Web~Witch    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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