This review is also for the "I Write in December-January-February"  contest!

What I liked:
I entered this contest as well, and I love your entry. I find this contest to be so interesting and challenging, and you definitely met the challenge. There is only so much one can do in 3 lines and 12 syllables, but in that small space, you managed to paint me a nice picture. We haven't been having the best weather where I am right now, and I felt that you may as well have been looking out my own window watching the same storm that rolled through last night.

Tone/Structure/Rhythm:
The raging clouds really set the tone of the storm rushing by the window, and you did a great job of following the constraints of the challenge, especially the rhyming scheme involved.

Overall Thoughts:
This was a great little piece, and I wish you well in the contest! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

Keep on writing!
Makenzie



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .