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Lefu  [13+]
A curse is on a town where a boy is sacrificed to evil souls every other Halloween night.
by Anthony Sanders
Review of Lefu  
Review by April Sunday
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
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DEC 1, 2016

Hello to Anthony Sanders .. with thanks for your entry in 2016's "Invalid Item" 

Must say, dear author, that this story really surprised me. All along, due first person presentation, must admit, I hoped for a reprieve for the lad.

Alas, no. Suppose this is what flash horror genre is all about.

Note: LEFU certainly manages to make use of very scary details.

The intro fits the plot very well.

Good luck in the contest.

Cordially, teffom@writing.com

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