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Winter Loon  [13+]
My attempt at an Englyn Unodl Crwc (just try to pronounce it) for Writer's Cramp.
by winklett in the woods
Review of Winter Loon  
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Balloonp* HI winklett! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Fairy*I was drawn to your title as I love watching loons and the idea of winter in its stark contrasts relating to the loon is appealing and poetic notion. It made me curious.

*Fairy*I am not familiar with this form but I so enjoyed reading it aloud with its echoing rhymes throughout. The alliterative second line is my favourite to read and an evocative notion. I did look it up--you could add an author;s note to the end as it is quite interesting. The syllable counts are spot on the soundscape seems to fit well.

The imagery is so vivid that I could enter your vision with ease. It is so beautiful to ponder. "newly hewn" is a fascinating idea too.

I so admire the effort creating this moving vision in this complex format. *Salute* It was delightful to read. Impressive! *Starstruck* Thanks for sharing!

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar
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