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 HI Megan! Guess who popped up on Random Reads?  I am happy to do a review to celebrate you!   How delightful to enter into one of your fantasy lands. The character of the enchantress here is shown well in her monologue to us. I can imagine her protective power , magic and yet understanding of the human kind as he gives her rules for inhabiting the forests in her keeping. I like the idea of a Rain Goddess as well and could see that this story could be expanded to include other natural phenomena and elements in a mythological way to honour Mother Earth. The language and sentence structure is simple so children could relate to it easily as well. It is interesting that Pegasus is black. I was curious as to why. Perhaps he is a descendant of the original., or just another with the same name.   I enjoyed the description of the place and would like to hear more details though I know this is a piece on the Enchantress's views. She may yet have more to tell! I love fairies!   This was fun to envision and a lovely retreat tonight after a day's work!  Thanks for sharing your magic.  I notice the images are now unavailable. Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable **
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You responded to this review 12/03/2016 @ 12:31am EST