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*Balloonp* Welcome to WDC Maoura Am! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


Your title popped up on the random reads and it got my attention with its visual clue. It made me curious to know what is the river and what is on the other side. So good hook!

Your short article gives your impression of a lesson from a movie and the tone was positive and I could tell you were enthusiastic about the theme. It was easy to follow and while you do not use much detail, you mention the one main choice in the movie that seems to make your point.
The messages you got from the movie are wise and make sense. I so like the notion about labels and how they are not us!

I was curious about how you use the word thrive--- I would have said "strive to change the past" or tried.

I think you could be a bit clearer about what the green light is--as we may not be familiar with the metaphor.*Wink*

Thanks for sharing this inspirational and vital philosophy. We are not our labels and are here to shine like the stars we are! Keep on shining. *Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!
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