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 Turkey  [E]
A Thanksgiving poem
by Chris Breva
Review of Turkey  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Balloonp* HI chris! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


*Chicken*LOL This short poem reveals a factual event and I like the way you personify the bird. I had to smile to think of him "waiting" as if he knows what is coming.

I do not know it this is a certain form. It reads as one long sentence so I am not sure why each line has capitals. I thought the third line was redundant as the reader can assume that the Thanksgiving is for this year. I think a more potent description for the way it smelled make it more vivid and sense appealing than "good". *Wink*

The down play of drama is appealing as the poet is reflecting on the reality of the turkey's role. *Star*

Thanks for the tribute to a turkey and thanksgiving. *Smile*

Light on the path as you write on!
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