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*Balloonp* Hi bobric! I found this on the Read and Review page! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! *Delight*


I was drawn to the title as it is dramatic and telling. A great theme for the Holiday season. *Santahat*

*Stockingr*I so enjoyed reading and listening to this poem! What a treat to hear it read aloud with expression. You really capture this personality brilliantly with vivid descriptions.
I picture a crowd going in for a sale! I have seen grabby people! *Facepalm* I liked "furs' sure to fly"! *Laugh*

The three line verses are balanced with consistent rhyme and flow that is effective. The content is well conceived and written. I only found a missing period after "gleam". It is good to know Gimme's are good for something! *Laugh*

Thanks for sharing this entertaining drama. You have a gift! *Starstruck*

Light on the path as you write on!
eyestar

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