Hi bobric! I found this on the Read and Review page! I am happy to do a review to celebrate you! I was drawn to the title as it is dramatic and telling. A great theme for the Holiday season. I so enjoyed reading and listening to this poem! What a treat to hear it read aloud with expression. You really capture this personality brilliantly with vivid descriptions. I picture a crowd going in for a sale! I have seen grabby people! I liked "furs' sure to fly"! The three line verses are balanced with consistent rhyme and flow that is effective. The content is well conceived and written. I only found a missing period after "gleam". It is good to know Gimme's are good for something! Thanks for sharing this entertaining drama. You have a gift! Light on the path as you write on! eyestar ** Image ID #1815342 Unavailable ** "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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