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Hello Survivor48

This is a thoughtful reflection on change and on life. I think your road imagery is used well and very appropriate to the subject. Life is a journey. We all have to find our way as best we can without a map and sometimes take wrong turns. Change can be hard to deal with.

Your title fits the poem well. I also like your use of s sounds in the poem especially towards the end. This helps the poem flow nicely.


Best wishes,
Mark


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