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Given: Dec 5, 2016 at 9:57pm
Length: 455 Characters |
455 w/o WritingML
This is a very amusing and probably honest story of how I would react with no internet. I think the whole world would lose it if they had no internet access, since we've forgotten how to live without it.
Your grammar and spelling was spot on, and you kept me engaged until the end of the story. I hope you have good luck in the contest! Also, love the twist with the psychosis. Gives the reader the feel of a desperate person really losing their mind.
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