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Greetings, Survivor48


This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC!

First Impressions:"Invalid Item"  is a poem that speaks to us of the kind of perserverance necessary in Life to fight "the good fight of Faith" - as St. Paul once put it.

"Invalid Item"  is a testament to the fight itself, but more importantly, what is there to catch the reader's attention? What is it within this writing that calls for us to draw from within our own wells of inspiration, and utilize it for our own purposes?

I think the first principles and any such endeavor has to be straightforward by asking ourselves the following question: "Why do I desire to make myself a better person? What might there be within me a feeling that I and I alone know that I can as a person elevate myself to enhance my life and my lifelong dreams?"

Marcus Aurelius spoke of his own ideas of first principles, as a driving force within us all, for in identifying what it is that we seem to lack that others yet seem to have in abundance, sets the formative stage in our coveting what it is that we seek after all....



Overall Impact: "Invalid Item"  gives us the tools to seek what it is that we desire so much: by attaining strength of character, strength in mind and body and soul through determination. It is this determination that unlocks all doors, for in once attaining what it is/was that we so sought after, we now come to grips with the secondary line of questioning within our minds and muse: "Now what? Now what is it that I seek, now that I have attained what it was that I sought so much?"

All in all, being human most often means that we never tire of seeking out the things we wish for. It is a never-ending race.



Errors: None found in this ably written poem.



Summation: I agree with this poem, its inherent philosophy, its call to arms in the true sense that we who are determined, can attain any height of achievement provided that we are driven strongly enough....




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