Hello, Princess Megan Rose 22 Years

What I liked

What wonderful images you've created! I love the theme of your poem.

What might need work

More cats, please. I think more mention of the cats woul make the ladies sound more eccentric, since many people have strange ideas about older ladies who live alone with cats, and you can play on those prejudices if you wish.

I will feel like Cinderella at the Ball! - no need to capitalise 'ball' in this sentence.

Were The Red Hat Society and we can handle life's punches! - We're, not 'were', because it's a contraction of 'we are'.

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob




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