Hello and I am reviewing as part of the "I write" contest. I am not one to read much folklore but this was an interesting story. I am very into 'odd' and mysterious happenings and this is right up there with that. This story leaves so many unanswered questions that leads to imagination. I think there was someone there with her. I think St. Nicholas was there, waiting for her to believe so he can have a reason to come ring the bells himself.

I didn't see anything that needed changed in this story except perhaps a resolution. Thank you for sharing this with us.