Hi, paddy1, I am Prosperous Snow celebrating . I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  for "I Write in December-January-February" .

The first stanza establishes the form, theme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm moves the spiritual emotions of peace and unity forward at a good pace. The last stanza is my favorite because it emphasizes unity. I encountered no distractions. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. Write on.



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