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Please remember these are my opinion and don't take it the wrong way.

Story line / Theme:I am reviewing "Bah-Humbug-A Holiday Rant". This piece is abouttThe rants of a bad Christmas.

Characters:There is no physical character description. However, there is plenty of emotion. I can feel the pain of this person. Great Job.

Setting:There is location setting, places and stores where this person is going and has been.

Suggestions:All I ever wanted to with my life is write. All I ever wanted to do with y life is write.

However the banker doesn't fail to give you a Lee-press-on-smile and wish you a merry Christmas! However, the banker . . .

However you bite your tongue so hard that it bleeds as you try to convince yourself that being Bubba's girlfriend for the next ten years isn't worth what you really want to do! However, you bite . . .

Over all it is a good rant. I like the title. Good luck in the contest.
My favorite part: "Thank you Scrooge,", is the response you believe would be appropriate but you would replace the word "thank" with a much more colorful one! However you bite your tongue so hard that it bleeds as you try to convince yourself that being Bubba's girlfriend for the next ten years isn't worth what you really want to do!


Keep on writing


Gypsy Ann